I read the spike level like a damn book. :3

Love the game so much Marcus! Just two things I'm not entirely clear on, both in the hallway standoff scene-
Who the heck was that 4 armed guy that passed by? Reference?
And what was the glasses wearing guard doing with his hand exactly? Another reference?

Your transitions at the drops are really abrupt, it just feels kind of unnatural. There should be some kind of impact or reverb snare or something on the 4th beat to kind of give the feeling that it's "jumping" to the next part. The drops are also seriously lacking high end, I think just a little LFO'd white noise would fit in very well. Other than that, nice job.

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Okay, so I may not quite have much to offer since most of the biggest points have been made already, plus I'm generally more into electronic stuff, but this was quite interesting. Your voice does sound pretty interesting, honestly the fact that it kind of sounds imperfect compared to more standard vocalists makes it kind of stand out to me in a good way, makes it feel more authentic I guess. You did kind of stray off key at 1:49 though, that could use a fix. And I also feel like more elements could be added to make it sound more complete, though maybe that's just the point since it's only a demo. I think it could easily turn into a solid lo-fi hip-hop sort of thing, with like soft percussion and subtle elements and all that stuff. Overall nice job, pretty impressive that you made those lyrics yourself, keep it up ;)

Well, it's a pretty nice emotional trip. My most obvious problem with it is how short it is, and how the beat doesn't actually pick up until 2/3 of the way in. Maybe it's just not my preference. But tbh it didn't feel like you took it quite as far as you could've, I think you should've kicked it off with what you did in the outro, built up the intensity steadily, then dropped off into the half speed part with the vocals, so basically just more traditional trance format. You were probably trying to go a different direction from what is normally done, but I think it's kind of limiting the song's potential. Sometimes there's a reason everyone does something a certain way. That's the only real problem I can think of though, the song itself is beautiful, instruments are very well balanced.